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From: akamine_chan (akaminechan@gmail.com)
Date: 01/04/2008
"Canada really had run out of first names."

That was such a great line. I have no idea why Turnbull has a tail, but it doesn't really matter. The interaction between Ray and him is sweet and cute and a lot of fun. Thanks for the great read!
From: china shop (deafhalfwolf@gmail.com)
Date: 01/01/2008
Hee! This is cute! I love the hint of backstory there, with "Can you pick things up with it?", and Ray not being fazed at all by Turnbull's many weirdnesses. Lovely!
From: Sprat (sprat75@gmail.com)
Date: 12/30/2007
Ahahaha, of *course* Turnbull has a tail. I love Ray's surprising lack of surprise about that. :)
From: viciouscats
Date: 12/29/2007
Hehe. Nice crack. :)
From: buzzylittleb
Date: 12/26/2007
I love your build up and your Turnbull characterisation. Slightly coy Canadians win.

<3 <3 <3

From: buzzylittleb
Date: 12/26/2007
I love your build up and your Turnbull characterisation. Slightly coy Canadians win.

<3 <3 <3

From: Lipstickcat (kez.designs@gmail.com)
Date: 12/24/2007
I love you!!!!! OMG! I can't believe you did this!!! I love it so much. I made so many strange little squeaks and whines reading it.

I was so worried I'd made my requests too difficult, but you've risen to the occasion and given me the best present ever!

Thank you so much! *hugs and kisses*

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