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Comments on The Chance of Life

Number of comments: 20

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From: Luzula (luzulae@gmail.com)
Date: 01/18/2008
Aww, that's so sweet. Sneaky Fraser, not telling him it was a date. And I like Fraser in figure skates.
From: malnpudl (malnpudl@livejournal.com)
Date: 01/02/2008
I'm all "Hee!" and "Awwww" and "Yay!" and *GLEE!* In other words, I loved this.
From: Nos4a2no9
Date: 01/01/2008
*g* This was great - it gave me a warm glowy feeling of happiness, and I love the combination of love and hockey. Nicely done!
From: kristiinthedark (kristiinthedark@gmail.com)
Date: 01/01/2008
Flat-out adorable. I got so much joy out of this story!
From: mergatrude (mergatrude@gmail.com)
Date: 12/31/2007
When I read the title, it sounded angsty! I'm so very, very glad I clicked the link anyway, as that was gorgeous and sweet and funny and delightful. I love courting stories, and this was lovely.
From: akite (akite68163@aol.com)
Date: 12/30/2007
I feel all squishy inside now. Awww...
From: Eledhwenlin (eledhwenlin@gmail.com)
Date: 12/30/2007
Awww, that was so sweet! Fraser trading skates with Ray and being chivalrous and not telling Ray it was a _date_. So very Fraserlike. :D
From: Queue (keeyoo@gmail.com)
Date: 12/29/2007
AHAHAHA.

Oh, I love this blissfully blind Ray, with a Fraser who may be gentlemanly but who knows what he wants and is quite determined to get in nonetheless. And the distinction between a Chicago first date and one elsewhere just hits right home. So fun - and just right.
From: Sprat (sprat75@gmail.com)
Date: 12/26/2007
Oh, I loved that! Hockey and dating -- two great tastes that are even better together. *g*
From: etcetera (etcetera_uk1@yahoo.com)
Date: 12/26/2007
Okay so that? Was /entirely/ adorable and yummy and sweet and really kind of the nice thing I wanted to be reading on Boxing Day evening.
From: buzzylittleb
Date: 12/26/2007
I think I am dead from the cute, dead I tell you.
From: Ignaz Wisdom (ignazwisdom@gmail.com)
Date: 12/26/2007
I adore courting stories, and this one is cute as hell. *g* Fraser! Being old-fashioned! So awesome.
From: Sage (sageness@gmail.com)
Date: 12/25/2007
Awwww, that was sweet! :D
From: bluebrocade (bluebrocade@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/25/2007
Oh dear. Old-fashioned, courtly Fraser is just too cute. <3<3 I loved it.
From: Primrose (primroseb@gmail.com)
Date: 12/25/2007
I love all of this, but especially the part about Fraser and the little kids and their tiny mittens and hats. Awww! Fraser so needs to have kids.
From: Stars
Date: 12/25/2007
Awww, this was cute. With hockey, whee! :)
From: J S Cavalcante
Date: 12/25/2007
Hee! Adorable story! Fraser on skates is indeed something to see. I love Ray's line about the date "...if it is a date, then why am I the girl?" Ahahahaha!
From: Ultra Chrome
Date: 12/25/2007
Wow! You not only had hockey, but Ray and Fraser playing it! That right there? Is love!

Such a sweet, wistful little story, with Fraser being the perfect gentleman and Ray being clueless. Did I mention I love Clueless Ray?

Just gorgeous. Thank you so very, very much. I adore it. :)

From: Ximeria (ximeria@popullus.net)
Date: 12/25/2007
*weeeeeeee*

Heh, I loved the sweetness of this story. How like Fraser to instigate a date and completely miss the fact that Ray isn't a mind reader LOL
From: viciouscats (viciouscats@gmail.com)
Date: 12/24/2007
Heee! And awwwww! :) Lovely story!

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