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Comments on A Lifetime Burning in Every Moment

Number of comments: 11

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From: Tues
Date: 03/21/2008
This is the best Ray. Sweet declarations.
From: kristiinthedark (kristiinthedark@gmail.com)
Date: 01/02/2008
Ooooh, that was lovely. Hot and sweet and perfect.
From: brigantine1
Date: 12/31/2007
Sweet, hot reunion fic! Putting an interlude between capturing Muldoon and setting out on their big adventure works just fine. I love the bit with Ray wanting to learn about Canada, even though - or partly because - it tried to kill him. Heh. Ray with pants on his head. :)
From: akite (akite68163@aol.com)
Date: 12/29/2007
Eeeee! I am doubly blessed this year! I love this story! I think Fraser's smiles are my favorite part. Though, the sex part was pretty hot. *g* I don't know what else to say but thank you, thank you, thank you, and I'm sorry I'm so late to comment, but I was out of town and just got home today.
From: kisiti (kisiti@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/28/2007
What a lovely and hot look at the time between Muldoon's capture and the adventure. Thank you so much for writing this.
From: Luzula (luzulae@gmail.com)
Date: 12/28/2007
Oh, that's wonderfully sweet and hot. Of course Ray wouldn't want to stay cooped up in a cabin. Also, I like Fraser talking out of control.
From: Stars (simplystars@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/27/2007
Eeeeeeeee, the hotness! And the smiling - first when Ray thinks that Fraser's wearing the same smile as in the ice field, and then later when it's an even BETTER smile...! The desperation and urgency between them is palpable and the sweetness of the ending wraps everything up like a big warm fuzzy hug. Yay! <3
From: viciouscats
Date: 12/27/2007
Awww! Sweet and hot. Yummy! :)
From: Nos4a2no9 (nos4a2no9@gmail.com)
Date: 12/27/2007
Oh man, this was a hot, sweet and very satisfying post-CotW fic, and I loved it to pieces. It doesn't get any better than courageous!Ray and worried!Fraser, and since you included them both in this story I think you should win everything ever. Great job!
From: sage
Date: 12/26/2007
awwww, yay! :D
From: J S Cavalcante
Date: 12/25/2007
Beautiful, and HOT! And I love Courageous!Ray. \o/ A story made of win.

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