From: spuffyduds (spuffyduds@gmail.com)
Date: 09/10/2007 |
Oh, this was just beautiful--sad and sweet and hopeful.
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From: jb80 (justbreathe80@gmail.com)
Date: 01/02/2007 |
oh! This was WONDERFUL. You managed a perfectly lovely and well pitched Fraser POV, which is NOT easy, and it was hurty and HOT without being explicit, and I loved it.
YAY.
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From: Aouda Fogg (aoudafogg@yahoo.com)
Date: 12/30/2006 |
Wow -- this felt really real and true, and it worked very well. Both of their voices came through clearly, and I really liked the small ways they were both taking care of each other-- Fraser helped in all sorts of ways at first, but Ray brought him coffee and took his hand there at the end -- so touching.
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From: brooklinegirl (brooklinegirl@rcn.com)
Date: 12/29/2006 |
oh, OH. I love this! I love the anger and frustration, the sharp edges of ray kowalski's frustration. I love Fraser knowing he is the most stubborn man on earth. I love Ray leaning back, I love Ray ASKING Fraser to distract him, and I love Fraser doing his damned best to do so.
SUCH a wonderful story! yay!
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From: exeterlinden (exeterlinden@hotmail.com)
Date: 12/28/2006 |
I like this a lot. It *hurt*, but I liked it. Great dialogue.
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From: Zebra (zebra363@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/26/2006 |
I liked this a lot. It's understated and believable. Very nice!
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From: J S Cavalcante (JSCavalcante@nycap.rr.com)
Date: 12/25/2006 |
Wow. Moving and gritty and real. Vividly written. I love seeing Fraser take care of Ray, bringing all his intelligence and humor and love to bear. Great piece.
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From: pollitt (mendacity17@yahoo.com)
Date: 12/25/2006 |
This was absolutely beautiful and a wonderful present to read on Christmas morning.
The small touches, the way Fraser puts Ray back together again through being there with him, touching him, out-stubborning him. I adore this.
Thank you.
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