From: Luzula (luzulae@gmail.com)
Date: 01/10/2008 |
Oh, this was lots of fun to read, and also hot. I love the line "Socks gave me lumpy breasts." Fraser is such a perfectionist.
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From: akamine_chan (akaminechan@gmail.com)
Date: 01/06/2008 |
Oh, my. Ms. Fraser comes out to play. Yay. I liked the fact that Ray was more comfortable working in the lingerie shop that Fraser was and that only gay guys would work there.
And I loved this, after they arrest the criminal,'Finally, the spell was broken by Fraser taking in a sharp breath. "She said that you couldn't keep your eyes off me."
He leant forwards slightly, eyes flickering as he frantically searched Ray's face for some kind of clue. '
Fun and hot and intense. Good job.
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From: green_grrl
Date: 01/04/2008 |
I LOVE Ms Fraser! And I love RayK getting a turn with Ms Fraser! And I love RayK getting Ms Fraser really sexy lingerie and melting his brain! Guh!
(Also: "Socks gave me lumpy breasts." HEE!)
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From: keerawa (keerawa@yahoo.com)
Date: 12/31/2007 |
Poor Ms. Fraser was so EMBARRASSED in that lingerie store! Whereas gay!Ray fit right in. And Ray getting all worked up over Fraser wearing the things he'd picked out for her ... mmm.
I don't even know what a basque is, but the idea of it being hidden but felt all day was very hot indeed.
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From: sage
Date: 12/29/2007 |
Heee! Ray is EVERY girl's gay best friend! \o/
(And Fraser in lingerie is a lovely image.)
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From: spuffyduds (spuffyduds@gmail.com)
Date: 12/29/2007 |
Lots of fun stuff here, but I think my favorite thing was Fraser's reasoning for giving "Francesca" as a fake name--the "same starting sound" thing was so strangely logical and, well, Fraser-y.
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From: viciouscats
Date: 12/28/2007 |
That was yuuuuummy! :) Undercover + Ms Fraser + lingerie = V is happy. *g*
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From: Iggy (ignazwisdom@gmail.com)
Date: 12/28/2007 |
Whoa, this was intense! I really enjoyed the read (and the return of Ms. Fraser, of course). Nice work!
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From: buzzylittleb
Date: 12/27/2007 |
Oh, this is just hot and fabulous. And the undercover casefic was just perfect. <3 <3
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From: Isis (isiscolo@gmail.com)
Date: 12/26/2007 |
I liked this! The plot was well done, and the little hints of depth under the surface humor were lovely - like the bit about Ray wearing Vecchio's skin. I was also entertained by the well-thought-out details, such as Fraser's choice of a first name. And the resolution was yummy sexy - Ray rescuing Fraser, yay, and then guh!
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From: Mickeymvt (mickeymvt@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/26/2007 |
Holy heck, this was freaking awesome! I love that you kept Ray as a man who just happened to be working in a women's lingerie shop while turning Fraser into the one who dressed as a woman was brilliant and a fun twist Ray's original description of Ms Fraser had me grinning like a loon and I adored that you brought Ms Fraser back. Ray's voice, especaially his internal voice, was dead on and I really liked he could not keep his eyes off Fraser in the shop- Ray has it bad for Fraser in this and that he can't hide it is so him.
The casefic stuff was great. It was something that would have been canon if they had more time and your secondary characters- Ned/James and Michelle- it felt like they were real people, despite how little they were "on-screen". The twist that it was Michelle who had done it was fabulous and totally unexpected.
And last but not least, Fraser in that last outfit- GUH.So damn hot. Ray not being able to keep his hands off Fraser in the car, then the making out all over the consulate and the piece de resistance, a naked Ray blowing a dressed only in skimpy lingerie Fraser is an image that will be burned into my brain for a VERY long time.
Thank you SO much for writing this for me!!!
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From: Tara Keezer (taralynnk@mac.com)
Date: 12/25/2007 |
Um, guh, with a helping of god, that was hot. Fraser in sexy lingerie makes my brain go to a really, really happy place.
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