From: keerawa (keerawa@yahoo.com)
Date: 01/13/2008 |
Sweet and satisfying. I particularly liked the context I, the reader, was able to bring to Fraser's statement that there's always a second chance, having watched "Victoria's Secret." Subtly done!
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From: Zebra (zebra363@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/30/2007 |
I liked the image of Ray turning sideways to talk to a Fraser who wasn't there, and "do you find me attractive, as a man?"
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From: Isis (isiscolo@gmail.com)
Date: 12/29/2007 |
I really liked the way the structure wound back to the beginning at the end. An interesting and gentle story.
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From: SA (sathinks@gmail.com)
Date: 12/26/2007 |
Oh, very nice! Just what I wanted! I love the thread of longing, of confusion, that runs through it. And I always love Ray POV. Thank you!
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From: viciouscats
Date: 12/25/2007 |
"will you take me back to Canada?"
Awww! Lovely story! :)
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From: Ximeria (ximeria@popullus.net)
Date: 12/25/2007 |
Sweet story and I love that Ray doesn't understand what he's letting go of until he's in Chicago -- fabulous
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