From: bluebrocade (bluebrocade@livejournal.com)
Date: 01/15/2008 |
Mmmmmmm. Lovely story. I like the touch of angst and the sleepy-sexy tone. <3
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From: Dessert First
Date: 01/07/2008 |
Oh, what a gorgeous story! So beautiful and sensual and *hot,* but also dreamy. Unhurried. I could feel Fraser's fear as Ray finally asked him the dreaded question--how long had it been? Ray, drifting along in a love-haze, drunk on sex and peaceful, and Fraser just kind of waiting anxiously for the other shoe to drop for three months. Oh, boys. Such a gorgeous story!
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From: green_grrl
Date: 01/04/2008 |
I love this! I love the dreamy, sex-hazed head space Ray goes to, because YES. Life is DIFFERENT on vacation. And fucking Fraser. :-D
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From: malnpudl (malnpudl@livejournal.com)
Date: 01/02/2008 |
Oh, this is lovely. Sweet and oh, so very hot. Ray really is Mister Instinct, isn't he; life just sort of happens to him and he goes with it and flows with it (and hell, yes, happily fucks its brains out). And there's Fraser, just as much in love but still in his head, still thinking and watching and counting and seeing, waiting until Ray catches up with him and opens his eyes. Wonderful. :-)
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From: Eledhwnelin (eledhwenlin@gmail.com)
Date: 12/30/2007 |
This story is so sweet and wonderful!
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From: akite (akite68163@aol.com)
Date: 12/29/2007 |
Great title! I love it that Ray's so in love and so into the sex with Fraser that he has no idea how long he's been there.
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From: Queue (keeyoo@gmail.com)
Date: 12/29/2007 |
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Yep. Still the cafe au lait of stories: hot, sweet, and goes down easy ;-).
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From: mickeymvt (mickeymvt@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/28/2007 |
I adore this madly. The easy way that they just slide into the sexual aspect of their relationship, the way that Ray just goes for Fraser in the cabin, but most of all, I loved the intimacy of this. It felt like I was really there at the end, watching this very private moment between them.
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From: Luzula (luzulae@gmail.com)
Date: 12/27/2007 |
Mmm, there can never be too much hot sleeping bag sex. I like how they're both kind of insecure, and how they figure out what they want.
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From: Nos4a2no9 (nos4a2no9@gmail.com)
Date: 12/27/2007 |
This was a fabulous, sexy little story that managed to have hidden depths despite the PWP exterior. I really enjoyed this!
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From: galen_lisle
Date: 12/26/2007 |
I liked this and how each was concerned for the other. And poor Fraser; so good at keeping track of the days. :)
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From: buzzylittleb
Date: 12/26/2007 |
This was just hot. And beautiful, the landscape of their love unfolding from a tent, a lone warm spot on the tundra, to a cabin and a future.
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From: Ignaz Wisdom (ignazwisdom@gmail.com)
Date: 12/25/2007 |
Aw, this was great -- lovely and sweet and hot as fuck on top of that. :) Really enjoyed it!
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From: Stars
Date: 12/25/2007 |
Oh, this was lovely and warm and truly had that blurry feeling of the title. Your Ray is perfect and OH, FRASER when he started to panic just a little bit that Ray was having a reality check and might all of a sudden leave. And the Fraser-Dief one-upsmanship was a hoot. Yay you! :)
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From: zabira
Date: 12/25/2007 |
i love this! i especially love that everything between them is unspoken but completely clear, that seems very true to the characters. that moment where ray says to himself that he *could* say those things to fraser, but doesn't? awwwwwww...
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From: J S Cavalcante
Date: 12/25/2007 |
I love this little piece. Don't think it's a PWP, either. Also? It is HOTHOTHOT. It is probably melting that third blizzard as we speak. :)
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From: viciouscats (viciouscats@gmail.com)
Date: 12/24/2007 |
Yay, what a lovely story! *happy sigh*
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From: Q (keeyoo@gmail.com)
Date: 12/24/2007 |
oh, oh, OH. I love this with a love that, while incoherent, is no less passionate for all that. (Sort of like making out with someone really hot from another country. Say, Canada...) Sweet, scorching, and only the vaguest trace of angst to highlight my beloved happy-ending romance. Mille grazie, dSSS. This is a great gift.
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