From: flmun
Date: 01/28/2008 |
my god. this is soo hot. Really well written. great characterizations.
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From: Erica (viciouswishes@yahoo.com)
Date: 01/21/2007 |
Very hot and excellent setup.
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From: phineasjones
Date: 01/10/2007 |
i have read this story over countless times already. i can't even verbalize the huge number of ways in which it works for me. i think it's completely amazing and hands down the hottest thing i've ever read. i'm seriously considering worshipping you, i hope you don't mind.
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From: Queue (keeyoo@gmail.com)
Date: 01/03/2007 |
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holy fuck.
Jesus Christ on a fucking POGO STICK, woman, that is maybe the hottest thing I have ever read, ever, EVER. My stomach is all hollow and shivery and my face is all flushed and...yeah.
Wow.
I may not survive the experience - but I couldn't ask for a better way to go.
*melts, smiling*
(I will be back later with better comments, when I have remembered what sentences are for.)
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From: slidellra (slidellra@gmail.com)
Date: 01/02/2007 |
Guh. So very hot and so very intimate with how well they communicate with little dialogue. And, you know, HOT.
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From: Primrose (primroseb@gmail.com)
Date: 01/02/2007 |
Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous. Holy shit. Which means, yes, I love it. Hot and then some. Mnf.
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From: tally
Date: 01/01/2007 |
wow. this is really something. something awesomely hot, that is. i really love your fraser in this. he's so hot and willingly vulnerable. plus, i feel that there's an imbalance in ds fic, in that fraser doesn't get fucked enough; he seems to be the one fucking more often. so i have a particular soft spot for fic like this. -- tally
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From: ldthomps (ldthomps@gmail.com)
Date: 01/01/2007 |
Hot hot hot! I love how much they Both loved it and wanted it and yet kept it special. Thank you!
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From: Pares (kormantic@yahoo.com)
Date: 01/01/2007 |
hachi freakin' *machi*, man. I love the incredible baseline tenderness of it, spiced with the wicked hotness.
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From: Icarion
Date: 01/01/2007 |
Oh god that was SO hot! Thankyou! :D
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From: krys
Date: 12/30/2006 |
Absolutely loved this, the accidental discovery and gradual escalation felt perfectly in character.
(Not sure I would class it as PG-rated though... not that I'm complaining!!)
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From: exeterlinden (exeterlinden@hotmail.com)
Date: 12/28/2006 |
... I don't even normally like bondage stuff, but this was *hot*. Great to read porn with a plot, with great characterisation and - best of all - yearning.
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From: Lucifercircle (Luciferofthecircle@hotmail.com)
Date: 12/27/2006 |
So hot. So very, very hot.
Your Ray voice is spot on and the kink fitted completely naturally into the story. This worked brilliantly and there was so much sex. Great.
This is seriously awesome and it's all for me! Thank you, thank you.
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From: Zebra (zebra363@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/26/2006 |
Great accidental discovery and slow escalation of Fraser's kink. As already mentioned below, it's all the better because they didn't do it that way every time: It was some of the best sex he'd ever had, and he found himself putting it off, having everyday, normal, not-tied-up sex with Fraser for as many days as he could, each session fraught with the possibility of kink. Nice to see them so hot for each other!
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From: omphale23 (omphale23@gmail.com)
Date: 12/26/2006 |
Oh my god. That was incredible--hot and right and perfect and I could *see* it all happening.
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From: joandarck (joandarck@gmail.com)
Date: 12/26/2006 |
So hot. Sooooo hot. Really, effective, heat-inducing hot. I mean, I was just entranced. I'd forgotten how good porn can be. Sex that feels like it's the characters - them wanting the things that they would want, as people, acting on it - watching them work things out, step by step, - the suspense of it, finding out your partner's boundaries and your own, the excitement of something that really *works* along with the queasiness of 'whoa, that really works' - that moment when Ray's trying to get the handcuffs out of his pocket and Fraser's laughing down at him, not yet knowing what he's going to see, what's about to happen - it was all so real, and so what's the word, *hot.*
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From: Allison (shoemaster@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/25/2006 |
Oh holy hell that was hot. I just love the accidental discovery and the fact that it *doesn't* automatically become an every day thing, that the kink stays special and nnngh, Fraser taking control at the end. So fucking hot.
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From: etben (et.ben.non@gmail.com)
Date: 12/24/2006 |
nnnngah! that's amazingly hot. *is dead*
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