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Comments on If It Ain't Broke, It Will Be

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From: JAJA (jaja@up4kinfo11.info)
Date: 09/13/2008
JAJA, UPYACHKA! UG NE PROIDET, BLYA!
From: Lucifercircle (Luciferofthecircle@hotmail.com)
Date: 01/08/2007
I really enjoyed reading this and I think both the Ray's were beautifully in character. And I really want to know what Fraser said to Ray K when he called him.
From: exeterlinden (exeterlinden@hotmail.com)
Date: 01/05/2007
Oh man. This was perfect. Favourite bits: the description of RayK's hands, the cell phone story, #4 *g*, RayK dancing while he's doing dishes. Lovely and wonderful, both.
From: tara (justbreathe80@gmail.com)
Date: 01/01/2007
OH HONEY...this is just wonderful. SO them, and every section is absolutely gorgeous, all on its own.

*hearts*
From: Isis (isis@arithmancy.net)
Date: 12/27/2006
Aw, this is sweet and hot and, um, sweet. I like the picture of the romance painted bit by bit. Oddly, I think my favorite part is the cell phone, but they're all fabulous little vignettes.
From: brooklinegirl (brooklinegirl@rcn.com)
Date: 12/25/2006
oh, this is so PERFECTLY them, and so vividly written. The part with Vecchio watching Kowalski talking on his cell phone was amazing and painful, both. I love, love, LOVE all of these - god, the dishes at the end, the cooking, the shelf space: *hearts*

FABULOUS job with them.
From: J S Cavalcante (JSCavalcante@nycap.rr.com)
Date: 12/25/2006
This is excellent. A Ray/Ray that doesn't break *me,* yay. Five terrific little vignettes. (#4 had me laughing aloud.) Broken things were a perfect, perfect choice for these two.
From: slidellra (slidellra@gmail.com)
Date: 12/25/2006
Kowalski clutched his mug to his chest and scowled, and that was the end of that.

and

"I can help," he said the first time, "I'm helpful!"

<3 <3 <3 <3
From: slidellra (slidellra@gmail.com)
Date: 12/24/2006
I love this, I love this, I love this. It is the best present ever. I love that it has unzipping and Kowalski hand porn (and Vecchio perspective on the hand porn, yay!) and affectionate, stubborn arguing and pain and just living with the pain. And number five was perfect with them doing this big romantic thing, but doing it with insults and avoiding the, um, feeling words. And I love it. A lot.

Thank you!

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