From: Luzula (luzulae@gmail.com)
Date: 02/24/2008 |
Oh, I loved this, and it made me grin like crazy. Funny and hot.
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From: spuffyduds (spuffyduds@gmail.com)
Date: 09/10/2007 |
so long and thanks for all the sexual tension.
was SUCH a great line. And loved the rest of it too--slightly drunk Ray is so much fun!
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From: exeterlinden (exeterlinden@hotmail.com)
Date: 01/05/2007 |
This made me really happy, in a giggly, "they are soo cute" kind of way that makes me feel very girly *g* I love your Ray, I loved the whole build up, Ray drunk and straightforward and really, really funny... And Fraser <3
And this: "I'm staying here with you. Even if the sex sucks," LOVE!
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From: bluebrocade (asjbg_chick@yahoo.com)
Date: 01/01/2007 |
Fabulous story! I love drunk!Ray finally taking the plunge. And Fraser tormenting him the next morning. ♥
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From: Lucifercircle (Luciferofthecircle@hotmail.com)
Date: 01/01/2007 |
Very amusing. And very enjoyable. You have an excellent Ray K voice.
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From: buzzylittleb
Date: 01/01/2007 |
Excuse me, I haven't stopped dying of laughter yet. Ray is just very very funny.
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From: Aouda Fogg (aoudafogg@yahoo.com)
Date: 12/30/2006 |
Hee! What a fabulous last line. Thanks for a great end to my day.
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From: pearl (schmerica@gmail.com)
Date: 12/26/2006 |
Eeeee, this made me YAY.
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From: qe2 (keeyoo@gmail.com)
Date: 12/26/2006 |
Oh, HEART. This was *tremendous* fun, from Ray waking up macrame'd into his own longjohns to the piping hot and equally hilarious ending. It's Ray at his most innocent, in some key ways, and a knowing, loving Fraser who won't let him hurt himself but wants him passionately nonetheless - one of the classic due South tropes, and you do it justice here. Also, love Fraser's blushing nape - I've got a bit of a blushkink where the good Constable's concerned - and the jaded, conspiratorial front-desk teenager, and Fraser's drive to clean their clothese balanced with Ray's drive to clean himself, and ... I could go on and on, but I'll just stop here: Seekrit Santa, I'm in your debt!
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From: omphale23 (omphale23@gmail.com)
Date: 12/26/2006 |
I liked this a lot! Ray drunk, and Fraser being noble and then well-prepared, and that's the best last line!
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From: Zebra (zebra363@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/26/2006 |
I love Ray's attitude here: "We do it, and if it sucks, I can go back to Chicago and you can go to someplace to be a Mountie, maybe with your sister, and we'll know we tried but it didn't work out. And if it doesn't suck, we can go someplace and you can be Mountie and I'll... I dunno, hunt bears."
and Fraser's response even more!
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From: J S Cavalcante (JSCavalcante@nycap.rr.com)
Date: 12/26/2006 |
Yay! This one put a big smile on my face. I just love FallingDownDrunk!Ray and Noble!Fraser and the whole scenario you cooked up here. I adored Ray's analysis of their S3/4 behavior--the same things we're always noting that "straight guys just do not do," as Ray points out. The ending is great! Such a hot image of Fraser leaning over Ray with a feral smile, and a great last line. It sure is going to be hot.
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From: Allison
Date: 12/25/2006 |
"he'd followed him because he wasn't ready to say so long and thanks for all the sexual tension."
Oh Ray. Oh Drunk Ray, trying to get it on with Fraser, and Fraser being way too noble to do anything about it. <3
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From: jamethiel_bane (jamethiel_bane@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/24/2006 |
See, I had this HUGE comment all typed out and entered, but my computer doesn't like it. So here's the cliff notes version
This fic made me wibble (I was SURE they were going to hurt each other and be all angsty after they'd gotten to the hotel) shriek with laughter (my cats are ashamed of me) and spray coffee all over my keyboard. It's wonderful and so, just... THEM!
OH BOYS! *smishes them together*
YAY! Very well done
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