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Comments on Duet with Brief Interlude for Trio

Number of comments: 7

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From: keerawa (keerawa@yahoo.com)
Date: 01/14/2008
Such a delight, to see Fraser and Ray so in love that they can reach out and share like that. Plus, much hotness!
From: bleedtoblue
Date: 11/01/2007
Ah, it takes a lot to sell me on a threesome...I'm sold.
From: mmmarmalade
Date: 05/08/2007
Y'know, I usually don't read any K/V fics, since for whatever reason, that pairing tends to squick me out. But since this was you, and I've read some of your other writing, I thought I'd take a gander at this one. I think this is the first fic I've read that involved the V/K pairing that did not squick me to any degree. This was just sweet and tender, with just enough snark to keep it believable. Absolutely wonderful. And of course, then there's the perfect grammar, which in and of itself is rather a turn-on.
From: ldthomps (ldthomps@gmail.com)
Date: 01/03/2007
Aw, sweet and Hot and funny and gorgeous little turns of phrase, like "a whole detachment of physiological reactions standing fully alert and ready for maneuvers." and did I mention the Hot? The three of them and their warmth and snark and love were like christmas all over again. Thank you!
From: primrose (primroseb@gmail.com)
Date: 12/28/2006
This may be my new favourite F/K/V fic. I'm not a PWP fan, mostly, and this has Actual Plot! Backstory for Ray/Fraser and Ray/Stella and sensuality and all that good stuff. I think F/K/V can be very tender, and you've done a great job of showing just that. Yay!
From: Alexis (alexis.muirhead@gmail.com)
Date: 12/27/2006
Okay, this was pretty much the hottest F/K/V threesome fic I've ever read, and also one of the most realistic. I loved the slow way you developed the situation - you transitioned nicely from Vecchio being a little lonely and haunted, and RayK just wanted to comfort him, into a full-blown sex scene that made me need to go to my bunk ;-) I also loved the unspoken communication between Ray and Fraser, and the way you balanced the tricky interpersonal politics by stating explicitly that Ray and Fraser are together, and Vecchio loves Stella, and the whole thing was just "about love", which was a beautiful and mature sentiment that felt just right for the story.

I also liked the ongoing conversation between RayK and Vecchio about Stella, and their acknowledgement that they have a hell of a lot in common. It was nice to read RayK and Vecchio interaction that was still snippy but not overtly hostile to the point where the reader doubts they could stand to be in the same room with each other, let alone fuck one another. Great work all around, and I'm going to be rec'ing this one to high heaven. Happy holidays!
From: Sage (sageness@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/24/2006
Thank you! And yay!! This was so tender and hot and sweet. I especially love all the added layers you gave Stella and how wonderfully full of love this story is. Thank you so much! :D

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